N Coded Poem (Read across then down)

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Pentacular	N Coded Poem (Read across then down)	Lead	[-]
Posts: 12 (10/14/06 04:15:15) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Tags : None Once the longing for the night is over sleep still for peace sleep still for us. Dreams place ages outside time within our hearts of delights lost us as our minds cloud waking consciousness we depart badly pecked by doubts greatness wakes; touch ing needed in nights measly pleasures, senses dreams until, as walls come erected, souls longing stillness returning life will silently well
Pentacular	Re: N Coded Poem (Read across then down)	#1	[-]
Posts: 12 (10/14/06 04:29:36) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Notes on the N coded poem series. The reader can read across, as in the traditional poem, or down. The punctuation gives way to sense, although it dictates the strongest need within conflicting sentences. The reader should read across first, and then down, then kaleidescopically across the text to catch meaning, only if there is meaning and sense. The N-Codes are not a linear form of poetry, they only begin that way. The downward sentences are mostly unpunctuated and the reader must read slowly to maintain flow of sense. Once the meaning is caught, reading down again fluently will accentuate the meaning of accross in suprising ways. The writer of N codes is writing across first and foremost, downward sense can be a suprise, even to the writer. Good luck with this, cheers, Gregory
casscara	Re: N Coded Poem (Read across then down)	#2	[-]
Posts: 38 (10/31/06 07:48:52) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	STUNNING! This is such a tender sad soul/human epic of what we breathe. I felt the rise and fall of breath in here, maybe created by the pacing ... the nuances of emotional surge and search. I also found it very erotic too grin .. subtly, gently and - depending on which way i was heading at the time, tinged with how we try so hard to create ourselves ... "badly pecked by doubts" ... that is so very how we are ... i don't really know how to comment on this form but i absolutely loved the journey, the way it asks for more from the reader, how the more a reader is willing to put into it, the more it gives - which makes this poem generous in the most fulfilling of ways ... no pre-requisite habits needed here so that makes this a liberating read as well. AWESOME!! *huge hugs, dear Gregory
S Michael Simms	Re: N Coded Poem (Read across then down)	#3	[-]
Posts: 3047 (04/15/07 09:27:58) Boogeyman/Chief Mod Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	holy cow! you must have a lot of time on your hands, man...
Ferroggiaro	Re: N Coded Poem (Read across then down)	#4	[-]
Posts: 14812 (08/15/07 09:03:54) Italian Brat/Admin Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	absolutely fabulous! I will be back to have a deeper look in a bit.

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