World On a Stick

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bluezoe	World On a Stick	Lead	[-]
Posts: 3319 (04/02/05 16:59:09) Killing poetry since 1994/Chief Mod Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Tags : None world on a stick, I suck and lick you dissolve on my tongue melting away the flavor slides down my throat i choke my head starts to ache you are a cold cold place
Ferroggiaro	Re: World On a Stick	#1	[-]
Posts: 14812 (04/03/05 09:37:46) Italian Brat/Admin Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Interesting descriptions. Title seems to fit as well.
Pentacular	Re: World On a Stick	#2	[-]
Posts: 12 (10/14/06 03:49:15) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts Report Post	Hold the world far enough away and it is a cold, cold place. So the title is perfect. Nice way this reminds one of poison and death and the way it slips down the reader's throat is slippery and the shock is at the end. Good stuff, Gregory

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