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I don't know how to
respond to this poem.
Revision underway?

QUIXOTIK

heh~!

No, I didn't hate it at all.
I tried to write what I thought
about it, but I couldn't quite
explain my reply in a readable,
understandable, manner.

I thought about dragons, though!
I think they are misunderstood
creatures misdirected by strange
circumstances.

After Said rhetoric: I got a little
lost, like a sheep in a field of wolves.



I'm editing my reply, because it
still isn't making much sense.
What I tried to say the first time
was when I think of dragons
I think of fire breathing creatures
who maybe at one time were very
kind and sweet, then maybe
someone put a spell on them,
made them fierce. They got used
to the fierceness, and the power,
and tried to be kind and sweet,
but just disappeared into extinction.

Something like that.
That's why I needed a revision...

oh dear.


quixy

I have a difficult time separating
the two, when objects of reality
keep surfacing in so many
different forms.

I like the metaphor you
explained. Your poetry
is very good.

Thank you.



QUIXOTIK